Don't be like me, keep drawing

[raspberryrain]

Updated to art-corrected version [version 1b] December 7, 11:51 am.
I'd like to do a better version of this. Or maybe I should stop telling folks what to do. e_e

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[raspberryrain]

I am trying not to talk down my own work. But I am really not happy with this comic. It’s missing a lot of where I meant it to go. I think I come off badly, as a hypocritical, selfish scold. And that last panel was originally shot for other lines which I cut in the posted version.

I may have sat for an hour arguing with myself whether to post it. I almost posted my emergency filler image for days when I can’t post otherwise. I considered posting a big shot from the scene, since I had some large shots I had scaled down for the strip; but that would have been too much like the previous three days. I finally posted it rather than put it off any longer. It was supposed to be Wednesday’s strip before I got sidetracked, after all.

Anyway, I’m not happy with the script, but I liked the colour design, so that’s something.