Fergus Barry 4
Sep. 29th, 2013 03:28 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)

Two months is an awfully long time to take to finish a strip like this. Sorry.
I had a bunch of snippets of scenes for this story in my head two months ago, and I don't think I got most of them written down. One thing that I'm afraid has made this harder is that I've been running without script and kind of writing in Photoshop.
(I realize now I have substantially forgotten the lines a character was going to say in a continuation of the scene with the band. I'm not sure I can get the same effect if I write something new.)
This was really slow to write. I considered leading into some of Fergus's backstory, but finally just threw a long panel at the end instead of trying to fit too much more dialogue in, or leaving this strip hanging until whenever I finish the next one. I think this works better. Sometimes clutter just gets in the way.